Not Going to Stop

Not Going to Stop1

To achive my goal2

Not Going to Stop3

I will not fill my bowl4

Not Going to Stop5

I'm not gonna eat6

Not Going to Stop7

I'll just take my seat8

Not Going to Stop9

I will throw up if I can10

Not Going to Stop11

Won't eat that roasted lamb12

Not Going to Stop13

I'll just push it away14

Not Going to Stop15

Won't eat it today16

Not Going to Stop17

Nope, I won't do it never18

Not Going to Stop19

I'll stop eating forever20

Not Going to Stop21

I've lost some weight22

Not Going to Stop23

Hey, I'm going to be late24

Not Going to Stop25

I'll be late for the doctor26

Not Going to Stop27

But he'll just tell me to eat28

Not Going to Stop29

I'm not going to the doctor30

Not Going to Stop31

I'll just sit here32

And wither away33

To Nothing34

But I know one thing35

I'm Not Going to Stop36

Author notes

The person has both anorexia/bulmia.

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  • WhiteBirdScream
    January 15, 2009

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    it was good, i like the repeated line
    i dont really like line 12 and line with line 18, theres double negatives, so say ever instead of never
    but prety good job :


  • The Jade
    January 14, 2009

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    Good poem Anorexia is a hard thing to deal with, I hope this person is not you. If it is, I am sorry. But this was really good Keep up the great work!