"Everywhere we go." Mrs Nicol chanted to the runners.1
"Everywhere we go." repeated primary 7 of St. Kenneths.2
"People always ask us."3
"people always ask us."4
"Who we are?"5
"Who we are?"6
"Where we come from?"7
"Where we come from?"8
"And we always tell them."9
"And we always tell them."10
"We are St Kenneths runners!"11
"We are St Kenneths runners!"12
Ms Wilkie stood in the middle of all this comotion, shocked at the way the school kids were running. Ms wilkie's class, P.5 were running with the P.7's, so thats why she was there.13
"6 minutes to go, no stopping!" Shouted Mrs Nicol. Yes, St Kenneths are the healthiest school in Scotland. But that has nothing to do with this.14
"Last thirty seconds and I want you to srint." said Mrs Nicol.15
Ms Wilkie, still in the middle of all this commotion, smiled with shock as she didn't think the children would be able to do it.16
But, Ms Wilkie was wrong. Everybody done it. No stopping at all.17
Not complete yet.
Author notes
this story was the day i actually had today, everything you read is true...
first impressions?
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A good story. In paragraph 13, Ms Wilkie should have a capital letter as it is a name. On paragraph 15, there is a spelling error. It should be sprint. I won't review any more because it's not complete. =)
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