Eyes. Windows into the soul, they say. Almond-shaped and deep, vibrant chestnut, yours are beautiful, beguiling pools of intrigue to me. Our gaze meeting was lightning’s strike. Eyes are over-rated. You looked straight at me with those dark eyes. You lied.1
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41 words, choice 2.
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Ooo. I was thinking this would be an 'aww' kinda story, and then it was...not. But even though it lost the 'aww' aspect, it was still really good. A sharp kinda good...if that makes any sense. Thanks for entering the contest!
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Awwww sweetheart. He's an evil bastard, you can do better than that. Hmmmm. That sounds familiar lol. Hope you manage it better than me!
~Alex~
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