After 4 years Sasuke came back to Konoha. He wanted to see Sakura because he realized that he really love her. And of course he got all the power that he wanted from Orochimaru. Sasuke was at the front gate of Konoha and was really excited to see his old friends.1
"Sasuke-kun is that really you?" A voice behind Sasuke said2
Sasuke turned and saw Ino. 3
"Yes Ino it is me," Sasuke replied4
"Wow you're hotter now," Ino responded5
"Ino please ----" Sasuke said6
"Gosh Sasuke I'm just kidding. I have my own man now. I got over since you left and I think Sakura did too but she really changed when you left," Ino responded7
"What do you mean?" Sasuke asked 8
"Well look for yourself," Ino answered while dragging Sasuke in Konoha9
Ino stopped and looked around and she saw all of the genins(but now they were all chuunins)10
"You guys look who I found infront of the gates," Ino told the other chuunins. 11
"Who?!" They all asked12
"Sasuke-kun!" Ino answered 13
All of them were looking at Sasuke smiling but except for Naruto.14
"Youthful Sasuke when did you arrive in this youthful village?" Lee asked15
"Well just now," Sasuke answered16
"Hmpff...So what if Sasuke came back?" Naruto finally said17
"Naruto-kun don't be like that we've all been waiting for him since the day he left," Hinata replied18
"He didn't care for us,his friends, when he left the village. He only cared about himself and look at us now we're all chuunins. And he's the only reason why Sakura-chan has been like that for 4 years. And now he comes back,why, because he wants to ruin our lives again. He already ruined Sakura-chan's life and what now," Naruto explained19
"Look Naruto I know you're still mad at me because I left for power and you guys had to look for me but now I'm here and I'm really sorry for what I did to you guys. I promise to you all that I'll never leave the village again and I will be a great friend. And I promise that I'll never cause trouble to anyones life, but if you cant accept me I'll just leave and vanish forever," Sasuke responded while walking away from them20
"Look Sasuke....." Kiba started then Sasuke turns around21
"We really did miss you....." Ino continued22
"Its just hard for us because everytime we look at you we remember the hard times that the gang went through....."Naruto continued23
"Especially the things that Sakura-san did to forget you," Hinata added24
"Why what happen to Sakura?" Sasuke asked25
"We don't know if we're ready to show you..." Neji said26
"Just please I want to know what happen to Sakura!" Sasuke replied27
"Sasuke, we know that you can't handle about what happen to Sakura. It was hard for me and Naruto because we really love Sakura-chan and seeing her like that made us want to die," Lee responded28
"But please I want to know what had happen to her," Sasuke pleaded29
"I think we should let him see," Tenten said30
"Fine but just don't try to kill yourself like what I did," Naruto told Sasuke31
"I'll try," Sasuke said32
What happen to Sakura? Find out in the next chapter33
A Naruto story chapter 1: Sasukes mistake
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Comments
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i liked it i love naruto but some of what naruto said didnt sound like him
beginning: 3, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 4, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I don't think you wanted your story to be cute, but that's what I think it is.
CUTE! ^^
I'm sorry, it's just how you made them talk, like Sasuke saying sorry to all of his friends!
AWWWWWWWW!
I know he would never do that in the real story, and that's what makes this story so CUTE! -
what?
what happened to sakura??? did she turn emo or something??/?
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cool
it was great i wonder what happened to sakura... btw i would give u an applaud but i have no points....beginning: 3, language: 2, ending: 5, dialog: 3, characters: 5.



