Click. The beginning of a journey was forever framed in that picture. Me, standing next to the driver’s side door of my blue Subaru Forester, and Nadia, standing next to the passenger’s. That day, it was the last of summer. It would become the beginning of a friendship beyond sisterhood.1
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choices 1 and 3. the entire store is here: http://allpoetry.com/Story/1064011.
barely made the limit, but i love this contest!
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thanks
you might want to read the full story, i'm still working on, but this was shortened for the contest.
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Awww, that's so beautiful. The sentiment was heart warming and the description very good but i think what i enjoyed most of all was the 'click' at the beginning. What a lovely touch!
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did you read the whole story?
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dude, sash, totally cool. and yeah, we really have bonded this year, and we have another year to bond to, our closeness is gonna be insane.
luv ya,
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i'm glad you like my name, it makes me happy-im magicflyingpig sister's, the stories true.
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That's pretty awesome. ^_^
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thanks! its actually a true story- my mom took the photo on the first day of school this year as i drove my sister and i to school for the first time. as cliche as it is, we've really "bonded" this year going so many places together. i must credit the name to my parents; it really is my sisters name.
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Ooer - very interesting. It sounds like the start to a story that could be sad, fun, exciting...And the whole idea of the photograph capturing that beginning rocks. You also get kudos for using the best name in the world (Nadia). ^_^
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