In my shell

In my shell is where ,i hide 1

where it's safe and warm 2

i watch from my room ,3

as time stands still4

i watch friend 5

why cant i move on,6

i feel only sadness in my heart,7

and soul,8

i cant be saved9

so i wait till i fade away,10

when will i feel safe,11

till i can 12

i'll hide in my my shell13

safe and warm

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  • Mel-the-Believer
    February 2

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    This is really good. It can be hard feeling like this and it can be hard to move out of that shell. Wonderfully written. God Bless! *hugs*


  • scriptor
    January 16
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    i like it. Sorry, i dont really have anything constructive to say, but i have felt like this before


  • citcat
    January 14
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    soooo good
    i relate to this


  • Adelaine
    January 12

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    Bravo.

    Wow. I am sure so many can relate to this poem. It is well-constructed and the message just touches the readers.

    - Adelaine