Your Welcome Glare

I was starting to revert,
Into a dry desert.
But you are my rain repair,
You're the answer to my prayer.1

I couldn't come to grips,
You're the end of my eclipse.
Out of the shadows, your welcome glare,
You're the answer to my prayer.2

But even needed rain has a cloud,
And light will lead to a dark shroud.
But I don't want us to fade away,
And that is what I will now pray.

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  • Siby Anan
    January 11
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    this is so beautiful
    the rhymes kind of sound forced, though D:
    otherwise, very well done! <3