On This Journey

I'll keep walking, down that road
Searching for answers that can never be told
And I'll keep on walking, and lose my way
Cause nothing will stop me on this lonely day1

I have a mile, a mile to run
And I'll keep on running 'til I reach the sun
No matter what they say, what they do
Nothing can keep me away from you2

I had a dream, one expected I'd live
I'll keep on dreaming, though what I have to give
It seems so little, but I hear you calling
Only your love can prevent me from falling 3

As I keep running, and walking along
I hear your voice, as it sings its song
And I'm getting tired, nearing the end of the race
At last I feel your heart, beating at a fast pace4

No longer I'm searching, I have now won
I am finished, no more shall I run
And forever I'll stay, in the safety of your arms
As you cradle my hand in the warmth of your palm...

Author notes

Mmm yeah inspired by a song. Different to my usual writing style.

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  • wow

    this is a really awesome song. What inspired you? holly crap it was really good

  • Great

    Beautiful. What song inspired you to write this? Sounds like it could be a Chris Isaak song.


    • Midnightmare
      January 14
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      It was actually a Kings of Leon song, one from an older album.
      Thank you for reading and commenting