If i could pick any day live over and over again ..............
it would be the day I met you1
If I could pick a day to forget..........
it would be the day I left you.2
If I could pick a day to redo.......................
it would be the day you said "I love you"3
If any day could be undone..........................
it would be the day I said me too.4
If any day would be turned into a movie................
it would be the day we we first made love5
And if this day was given a name................6
it would be, "Bullshit"7
Author notes
I was looking over old blogs on my space of mine and i found this. I like. I dedicated this to my three time ex J.S.
and he like twilight nother reason we don't get along
He would say "twilight is amazing except ppl who hate it"
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lol I likes this one the most!!XD
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This is really good...regrets are something we all have and I can definitely relate to them myself.
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yea we win some..lose some. this one was better lost
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Guess that ex won't be getting a fourth time? lol.
It's easy to see how you feel in this poem. I like that. It's short, simple and too the point. The only thing that kinda jumped out at me was the 'me too' thing. That can be bad or good, depending on how you looked at it. It stopped me in midsentence to think about it, but it was mostly because it was different from the first three parts.
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lol thnx
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