Ill never ever get to know 2
a boy or a girl no 3
you were a mistake 4
nothin' more 5
even though I never met you 6
I want you to know 7
I woulda treated you like a sister or a bro 8
my god child I promise you 9
when the next life come around 10
I will always be there 11
And help you turn it all around 12
These things happen you see 13
Its not up to us anymore 14
your life isnt in my hands 15
I couldnt help anymore16
If I could though I am sure 17
I swear to you id find a cure 18
Please forgive me I really did try 19
to make sure I wouldnt see you die 20
Author notes
One of my best friends became pregnant with another one of my friends kid. I was always afriad my friend (the guy) would raise the kid to be in a gang or do drugs like everyone else so I convinced him not to introduce him into that shit but in the end she got into a crash and had a miss carrige....and I was gonna be the kids god father. I guess this is a tribute to him/her.
Comments
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Not bad, though I do find it hard to critique writing on such a deeply personal subject.
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Thanks man.
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She had a miss carrige, why wasnt i told. any way great write man.


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Yeah man few months ago, when they was still together
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This is really good.I'm really sorry about what happened though.
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Thanks for commenting
~M~
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Aww. :/


beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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I'm really sorry. This was great.
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Thanks for reading.
~M~
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