L=Love

Love- for some it's a fantasy nobody can let go of, but for others it's a depressing path that leaves you lost like an idiot in the middle of nowhere, leaving you to lose your life because your heart is broken. But for me, love... is the bipolar feeling that goes through my every now and then, bringing me closer to people and further them, and into the twisted reality of life... It's not the question of whether love is beautiful or whether love is depressing, but it is the question of how much somebody will devote their love.1

And so loved changed me, with the endless feeling of being lost in those dark woods, on the endless path of cobblestone which I stand on now, as well as the endless feeling of being saved by a fallen angel who fell into those same woods, to my same path, that gets me out of my prison of hatred. It is love that I will forever hold close, no matter how much love lies to me.2

For with love there will always be the dark woods of hate- which the path of life will lead you to, only to be saved, by the fallen angel from the sky, whose love will be handed to you. For that fallen angel causes love that will always be held to you...

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I'm not going to proofread, in lazy hopes that i made no bad errors, but I will say this: I'm pretty sure I entered the contest wrong. But if you find a problem with this, then err... just remove me from the contest. I'll survive... bringing this idea was thanks enough.

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  • Silver Heart
    January 24, 2009
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    gr8

    this is pretty good. gr8 job


  • KeepDriving
    January 7, 2009

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    Thank you for entering the contest! I really liked this piece, and all the metaphors and imagery that it had. Especially the part that said, "For with love there will always be the dark woods of hate- which the path of life will lead you to..." Good luck in the contest! Oh, and by the way, you didn't enter the contest wrong. It was actually just what I was looking for. Again, good luck!

    -Jenny