the one

he makes his way through the lifeless crowd
passing only shades of grey
shes there somehwere, his true love, he vowed
waiting for the love shed say1

and then he saw the girl in red
against the black and bleak
the only one now in his head
the only name he'll ever speak2

she stole his mind and his heart
he doesnt want it back again
the way she loves, its like an art
shes his lover and best friend

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  • heartfullofvenom
    January 6, 2009

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    ~*~

    Aweeee...

    [:

    Aweeeee....... Calebbbb I love this so so so very much! Gr and you say you cant write well. pshh. It was fantastically written.
    Mhhmmm I love it so much.
    Absolutly Amazing it is.

    ♥

    I lul you.


    • cjhabes2010
      January 6, 2009
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      ==]

      did you like it??
      tahnks doll

      but i had really great inspiration fersure ==]

      absolutely amazing=you

      i love oyu too