I guess that I have to start at the beginning, I was wondering through the corridors of a website, every now and then I peeked into one of the rooms, and glanced through the property of the rooms owner. I stumbled through many rooms, before I decided I wanted one of my own.1
And so I became a member, and began filling my own room, people stopped by and glanced through my things, sometimes leaving a note to let me know they'd been there, sometimes including a compliment or well wishes. 2
Now one particular person began leaving messages for me quite often, and as I grew to know this person, I started to have feelings for her.3
It seemed that she was feeling more than just a kinship toward me also, and so we began writing to each other, then sending little surprises to one another in the post. 4
My new love lived only 200 miles away, and I knew that it would be simple enough for us to travel half the distance each, and then finally i would be able to hold her in my arms, taste her kiss, and explore the curves of her body.5
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I sent her an e-mail, and took the brave step of sending her my photograph. She sent me a picture back, and although not what some would class as a classic beauty, I was smitten.7
My friends warned me about getting too attached, and thought that my declarations of love, were the stupidest thing they'd ever heard. I therefore told no one when I arranged to meet Joanne at a hotel in Brighton.8
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The sun was doing it's usual no appearance act, and the sky was an uninspiring shade of metallic grey. I slipped out of the house, anxious not to make too much noise because of the early hour. Not a morning person, it was unheard of for me to be awake, let alone showered, dressed and on my way to Brighton at five in the morning.10
I clambered aboard the coach, clutching my Navy overnight case, decorated in it's original red piping, and with the addition of many badges, I knew it would not be confused with any one Else's, however I was worried about becoming detached from it, and the presents that it was filled with for my precious Joanne.11
Midday, and the sun peeked through the dense fog of cotton wool cloud as we arrived in the bus terminal, my heart was palpitating wildly, and my hands were coated in a thin film of nervous sweat. Clutching my case and my A-Z tightly I disembarked, and made my way slowly through the unfamiliar streets to the Hotel Gabriella. I hovered nervously for a moment before asking for the key for my room. "Caitlin Smith" I told the receptionist, when asked for my name. Clasping the key, I asked if my companion had arrived yet, and was asked for the name. Joanne Brown I stammered. The receptionist glanced at me from beneath her eyelashes and told me that " Miss Brown, arrived twenty minutes ago and has gone to freshen up".12
More nervous than I remember ever having been, I made my way over to the lift, and press the button for down. As I vacate the lift, and begin checking door Numbers for our room, a door opens ahead of me, and there seeming to be bathed in a ray of sunshine stands my love; Joanne.13
We recognise one another immediately, and stand there drinking in the sight of this person whom we know inside out but have never met. Finally we slowly walk towards one another, and cry, laughingly as we finally are able to hold the other in our arms. Standing there upon the beige hotel carpet in the middle of the corridor, we share our first exploitative kiss. The kiss just deepens the feelings I have already, and soon I am flushed with the heat it creates in me. We break apart as a couple pass us tutting loudly, and kissing once more Joanne pulls me along with her as she throws open the door to our room. I noticed nothing about the room, could not tell you how it was decorated, or the colour of the curtains, all I do know is that in the very middle stood a vast circular bed, half surrounded by a brass headboard. It was the stuff of fairy tales.14
We stripped each other in slow motion, removing one piece of clothing at a time, and taking time to explore the skin newly exposed and new to each of us. Joanne had a strawberry mark on her left shoulder, almost a perfect heart shape, it could almost have been a tattoo to the untrained eye. I delighted in kissing it, and rubbing my tongue over the slightly raised surface. It could not have been too long, but it seemed like hours later when I was first able to feel her bare skin against my own, and we lay there on our sides clutching one another tightly, feeling the warmth of our passion in all the places our bodies touched, and those they did not.15
I moaned as her nipples brushed my own, and I felt hers peak in response.16
Sliding her on top of me, I sat up slightly so that now I held her in my lap, and she instinctively wrapped her legs around my waist. I pressed my lips to her shoulder, and ran my tongue from there to the underneath of her breast, sliding it all around the outskirts, before doing the same to the other breast. Finally I ran my tongue over the rosy nipple, and watched delightedly as it sprung to attention. Taking almost the whole of her breast into my mouth, I suckled gently, but soon harder in response to Joanne's thrusting and groans. I felt her body spasm slightly, and was amazed as cum wet my thighs and added to the moisture of my own dripping pussy. Delighted at her ability to come just with breast stimulation, I did this again and again. Joanne slid me back onto the bed, and began her own exploration, and pretty soon I was writhing in Ecstasy,as she thrust her long tongue in and out of my throbbing cavern. She circled my clit with the tip of her nose, still making love to me with her tongue. 17
We did not leave the room at all, and barely even stopped loving each other enough to use the toilet, and drink coffee. The next morning, we made love again, and I told Joanne that I loved her, I was shocked when she just looked at me and smirked slightly........18
Joanne pulled her clothes on, and as she left the room, said "there is a present for you in the bathroom cabinet" She left without another word.19
Startled at the drastic change, hurt, and uncertain, tears blinded me as I stumbled into the bathroom. Reaching into the cabinet, I pulled out a lilac coloured envelope, decorated in small swirls was my name. I opened the envelope, and sank onto the floor knees to chest as I read the hateful words scratched there.20
My dear Ignoramus,21
well you were nicely taken in weren't you?22
as you read I am on my way to the next mug who will pleasure me whilst my husband and his friends empty their home and bank accounts. Thank you for the night of pleasure, Joanne Brown. aka the temptress xx.23
I sobbed into the discarded towel on the floor, and felt dirty and used. I did call the police, when I got home and discovered that my home was indeed empty, and my bank accounts plundered, however they do not hold out much hope, as the gang have been operating this way for 2 years now, and remain elusive as ever. So to all you web users, a warning, please do not meet up with a girl called Joanne who uses the pseudonym Tainted Love.24
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it was believable until the 'crime' lol... unless of course you're here in nyc, which from your author page i know that you are not.... the story itself was great though... i'd be takin' dna samples off my tits if i were in those shoes.. and i'd hunt to the ends of the earth for revenge if i had to (okay, so i'm a little angry, it's a ny thing) hot story... nicely done
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Hi My Angel Of Music, hope you are ok, thanks for reading and commenting! Glad that you are aware of potential dangers in meeting people from the net, there are a lot f success stories though too, in fact my friend and landlady has met her last three gf's on gaydar girls, and has had some good experiences. Any way glad you liked it kxx
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Hi there Shae Lynn, thanks so much for taking the time to leave a proper comment, it was an experiment really, i have read short stories that had a twist and wondered if it would work in an erotica. If nobody spotted the twist until the end, then I guess I got it right! I really enjoyed sunflower, and will be back to read more of your work. Hope you are well, tc lve Kayleigh xx
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Hi KerriLark87, thanks for taking time to read and comment, glad you liked it. It was a new style for me but i enjoyed writing it
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Hi missmorticia, glad you liked it. ythanks for reading and commenting. UTC xx
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wow what a way to caugh our attention. i liked the spin in things, and i know better than to meet up with someone i met on the web but hey we all make mistakes. keep writing. -
What an amzing twist to something so heart wrenching. One minute you're hanging webs to suggest some happy ending for your characters and the next thing I knew I was reading on in utter disbelief. It has almost broken my heart...
A spectacular write, and a beautiful demonstration of the cruel temperament of a devious woman. Oh, and thank you for reading "Sunflower". It was one of those pieces that comes out in a rush after an upsurge of emotion. Bless you poetess...you are truly talented.
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Wow what a wonderful story. Such a sad ending, though. I liked it =)
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that was awesome i love the twist at the end
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Hi there Frightendove, thank you for taking the time to read and comment. I appreciate it. It is made up though, and i am surprised how many people have thought it based on fact! I'm glad you like my stories, thank you love Kxx
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Excellent erotica
This just blew me away. I can't believe some people can be so deceitful and hateful. I am truly sorry this wonderous tryst turned out so tragic for you. Your stories are so easy to read and quite enthralling. Well done -
Hi Briteshadow, thank you for reading and commenting, glad you found it interesting, and appreciated the twist. Kxx
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Hi there pangur ban, thanks for taking the time to read and comment. It is a bit of a twisted tale really, I guess I'm experimenting a bit at the moment!
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Hi there Laura d, good to have your feedback as always. I am glad it was still a hot write, although different from my usual! Hope you are well love K xx
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Hi Linda, this was totally fictional, it was just inspired by some of the tales you hear about those people who prey on others over the internet. Your kind comments and thoughtfulness are greatly appreciated. Kxx
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wow, that was...interesting, good choice of title for it. very... good twist to it there, keep writing!
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I'd say this had quite a twist -- no one likes being played, regardless of one's sexual orientation. Interesting and somewhat disturbing write... Thanks for posting
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Beware Internet hook-ups!
I knew there had to be something to this story, a weird little cautinary tale about the Internet, from the way you described it in the first paragraph, as a room you set up.
A sad story -- though that doesn't detract from the amazing hotness that I've grown accoustomed to from your writing! -- but probobly a good thing for people to read.
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I have a feeling that this is a true write and I feel so sorry for how you were deceived. I have, myself dated guys on dating sites thru the internet, and have stopped doing that, as I have also been terribly hurt by them! Thank you for sharing this sad, but, wonderfully written story!Please don't let this sour you on finding your true love!
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Hey Ju, good to see you here, I hoped the twist would be totally unexpected, and now I know it was Hope you are well sweetie, hope to catch up with you soon Kxx
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cool concept! definately did NOT see that coming
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Hi there lexie, it is totally fictional, I just wanted to try an erotica with a twist, what did you think top the twist? I know it is a bit creepy, but these things do happen! Thanks for stopping by and commenting, will return the favour Kxx
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okay i've really enjoyed your work in the past but for some reason this one kinda creeps me out, i hope to hell this is a fictional story. lexie
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