Tears

I can see those tears in your eyes,1

the pain you can't hide,2

Your still in love,3

but you don't know why.4

You deny all the hurt5

Which leaves alone and deprived.6

But you need to know I'm here.7

Ill hold you when you to be held,8

Ill shelter you when no-one else knows9

And i see the tears running down your face,10

And i can see in your eyes the reasons.11

You need to know, 12

That we love you for you,13

No-one else, could make me laugh the way you do.14

And when you can't walk on,15

ill be the strength in your heart,16

to keep you moving on.17

Don't cry, no-one likes tears,18

Everyone has a secret,19

But some have fears.20

I need you to know that your loved by all,21

you'll find the one soon enough!22

You are so special to me,23

Your the friend i count on in all honesty,24

You make me feel like the worlds worth living for,25

No open your eyes,26

Your the key to your door.27

Anyone you love will be lucky to have you,28

You've got the talent,29

Now don't let it die.30

Just keep on moving till you see where you are.31

And soon deep inside...you'll find the one you truly desire32

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  • Jessica Lee 003
    May 21, 2005
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    aww this is cute.. awesome job! i like it.. keep up the great work n take care

    -Jessica. <3


  • sky black
    May 19, 2005
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    awwww thats really really cute! we had a bit of rhyme in there, that worked! YAY sori im one for rhymes! well fab write babe, *hugs* laters.....love ya sky xxxx


  • spoilt angel
    May 19, 2005
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    awwwwwwwwwww, dis is a mega cute poem hun!! gr8 rite xxx

  • Cheeky paper
    May 18, 2005
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    This is really sweet poem and yet sad. You wish the best for your love , that is truly love.I can image that you're really best friend , and lucky for your friends who got you ! This is a wonderful job , nicely done, keep on writing , you're talent ! I can't wait too read more of your work !
    Thanks for sharing with us.
    ~papergirl~

  • Heather.x
    May 18, 2005
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    wowowowow!! hehehe, thts gr8! for jess???? hehehehehehehhe! amazingly amazingness in that amazing poem!!!! luv ya x x x x x x x x x x x x I LURRRRRRRRRVE HIM!

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