Torn

Love is such a joyous journey that takes you on many rollercoaster rides along the way.1

You think about that person every second, every minute, every day.2

You open your heart to them and they do the same.3

Making you feel so open, so free, so tame.4

Love is also heartbreaking.5

It can make you have a painful aching.6

You cry for hours, just wishing you could be with them like before7

But just thinking of that makes you cry even more.8

When you are heartbroken from love, it makes you feel so unwanted, so worn.9

It can rip your insides out, it can make you feel torn.10

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  • Shadow06
    January 12
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    This poem is sooooooooo true!


  • EZlats
    January 5
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    You are so dead on with this, I totally know what you are talking about. Very well done


  • The Ruined
    January 5
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    I knoww

  • daftweejimmy gold member
    January 5

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    See! told you........

    .....that it could be something constructive. This is pretty raw, don't know if you intend to polish it, but if you do, let me know. I can't write poetry worth a damn, but I recognise good and potentially good stuff when I see it.


  • Dawn Bon
    January 5
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    =[ thats sad.

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