The beach is a wonder to me. To how our moon controls the currents and the many rocks and coral that gives the water its color. Sitting in the dull, warm sands, I watch as the cascading swells meet the starlit sky. Every push and pull of the water creating music to my ears. The scent and taste of salt is stuck to me all day long. Amazing how the sand beneath me can become a pearl or quartz just by the water alone! The beach holds stories as well as treasures. Forever changing, the welcoming seaside of sand and rock will be my home.
A contest entry
- The Beach by flowerbee1234.
153 points, ended February 17, 16 entries
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Comments
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I agree with TMNT! This did in fact blow me away, and I like how you described to me what the beach looked like, which was all I wanted.
Great luck in the contest!
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The discription in this poem blew me away! I could see everything happening! nice job!


