The Beach

When I go to the beach, it's like heaven on earth. I always love it. The sand sometimes is like quicksand, because it's kind of neverending, and it's hot too. The waves can get pretty huge; almost eight feet. I hate the taste of saltwater; it can get pretty gross. The water is usually cold to the touch, and from my beachhouse, I can hear the waves overlapping. It always smells like...well, actually, it's a little silly, but it smells like summer. Just everything blended in makes it so intoxicating. The beach is probably my favorite place on earth, just because sometimes, it can be the picture of peace, especially at the dead of night.

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  • The Tmnts Sister
    January 4
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    I like it! You really told me why you like the beach! Now i like it to!


  • P H Savage
    January 4

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    That was very well written! I have to agree- the beach does remind me of Summer! haha.

    I'm jealous; I wished I lived near a beach! Good luck in the contest!

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    • MrsSpunkRansom
      January 4
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      thanks, i actually don't live near a beach, it's my beachhouse in the summer.


  • flowerbee1234
    January 4

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    This is great!

    You told me how much you loved the beach, and some things you didn't like. Yeah, I hate saltwater, too. Great job on this, and good luck in the contest!

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