fire

Consuming its victims within its path. 1

Taking every last breath for its ongoing victory. T2

he intense beauty of the contrasting colors,3

red, yellow, orange 4

combined give the romance effect of love.5

its ongoing pain and hurt,6

Reflect on its true intentions.7

Its crisp flame,8

Hissing and fumbling through my intense mind.9

Destroying my dying thoughts.10

i want to be enrolled into its passion,11

To feel the heat against my skin,12

To touch a fire burning sensation,13

Rush through my cold skin.14

To be surrounded by the ongoing flames,15

Repeatedly continuing a pattern,16

They roar the beat of my heart17

And make me feel the intense feeling of love18

Fire is burning deep inside,19

Waiting to be unleashed,20

Waiting for its victims to cross,21

Waiting to make me plead.22

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  • sky black
    May 19, 2005
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    well, thats.........wow. im amazed. i think i need to introduce you to HollowDarkness, my vampire, wiccan sister of darkness, you'd like her stuff and you both have similar writing styles that hook you. well written, l8az sky xxx

  • Julie-x-
    May 18, 2005
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    hehe cheers xxx


  • spoilt angel
    May 17, 2005
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    ooooooooooooooohh very gud! xxx

  • Heather.x
    May 17, 2005
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    oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! amazing! that rly is amazingly amazing! lol! well done hunny, am proud of you! lol! well done! luv ya x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x x