the ending paragraph of the book While Love Breaths

Days have gone, life aminds as the young evil stirs within. Only the pure must posses the ability to live. "But what pureity must it be to live from the evil still here," said the dark shadow of the room. "As love stands to fade, what pureity last. Only those who posses the ability to love, not the other way around," said as the shodow grew into a darker figure. "As love has died only those who still posses it is ment to help the evil the ways of the pure,
of the emotional people," the blackend figure on the ground said as he bleed to death by being shot from an evil person named James. "Than how is you are dieng right now from one of those who are as evil as evil be. How is it they are killing us off while our loves are stuck in a coner whatching the other die than killed," as the darkend figured begain looking like the love of the blakened figure who is dieing. Then glass shadders as a bullet inters the room killing the dark figure in the conner. Glen the guy who bleed to death after whatching his love Amber get shot in the head. So painful love is when others try to stop it. Why does it happen. Only death will tell. So hold on to your love and protect them. You never know what will happen.

Author notes

this is a book writen by me and it has not been published.
i wanted help on the ending paragraph. so comment on it so i get get finished.
thanks for reading

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