The truth i said was "i love you"1
The truth you told me was "i don't"2
My puzzled face catches your attention,3
you add trying to comfort my soul,4
"you are my best friend,and i do love you that way."5
"is it some day going to change?",i can't hide the pain in my voice.6
"sorry, but i can't love you in a different way..."7
I burst into tears, that was the only answer i didn't wanted to hear.8
suddenly, everything becomes dark...i open my eyes and find myself lying in my bed. My forehead sweaty, my hair tangled, and my heart beating so fast in my chest....9
It was a dream...just a dream...10
What else could had been?11
because the truth is...i would never confess my love.12
I won't because my dream tells me i should not....13
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Beautifully done...and so so sad! I love how this is portrayed in a dream. It's different from anything else I've seen done in this genre. Kudos!
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That's beautiful and heart breaking!! Wow! Really enjoyed it and loved your way of telling the story.
Thanks for sharing.
Welcome to AP, hope you enjoy your stay here.
Much love
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Awww...I really thought this was a good poem. A few spelling errors, but we all make little mistakes like that. If you really love someone though you should tell them, because you never know they just might feel the same way. Remember it was only a dream. Good Job!!
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I like this. Twas very well written:0)
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Kia Eglaci
thanks. i really thought it wasn't that good.
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cool story i like it
you go!!!!!!!!!!lol
good job keep up the good work
love kiki
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you havent fixed it Yoli! lol
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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My puzzled face catch your attention,
It should be "catches your attention."
It was not bad. But if you love someone, you should tell them.
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