I hate you so much that it hurts.
But I forgive because I love you.
Sometimes I wish I never met you.
Then this hurt could have been...
Avoided...1
I feel so betrayed and worthless.
As if I was nothing to darling you.
I feel used & torn into two parts.
And nothing can glue them again ...
Not even you...2
I talk to you and see everything.
And what I see tears me into two.
I cannot seem to not believe ...
Even though it hurts...3
I can tell that you do not get it.
Because you continue nonchalantly.
Living your life as if nothing ...
Has ever occurred in life...
Author notes
About a boy I still can't stop thinking about.
A contest entry
- I want your breaking up poems. by trekkergirl.
150 points, ended January 1, 20 entries
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Comments
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well this is not about the boy that first kiss. first heartbreak. was about but I still think I know who it is about and he's basically an asshole. I mean he's a cool guy and he can be nice but he's already gone threw like three girls this school year.
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I love it so much!!! I think many people can relate to what you have writen!! I hope that you will continue to write more!!!
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I do understand what you mean. My first boyfriend was like that. Even though I was hurting something terribly he went on with his life... seeing other women. He once told me that he thought that I only had a childhood crush on him. That hurt because he made it seem that I did not know my own heart. Which I did.
To this day... I still feel him in my heart. Even though, I have moved on. I have married a man who is first there in my heart.
Thanks for sharing this and thanks for entering it into this contest.
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