Love

“Do you love me?’’ That is truly the most dangerous question. To answer this means to give your heart to someone, to give it to them without restraint and without hesitation. The young girl looked into her lovers eyes. “I-I-I don’t know” she said in a hushed whisper. She was so young only 17, “But I thought you wanted to be with me, forever…” said the boy. “No… I never did’’ she said. That did it sent the boy over the edge. He killed the young girl, and then killed himself because she didn’t love him. So truly do you love me is the most dangerous questions

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  • uh...

    ok... kind of a weird story i was hoping to have more than that but it was okay i guess


  • StarIlluminated
    December 30, 2008

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    wow, powerful question. The story thing was kind of wierd with the whole killing spree thing, but the piece as a whole was good.