Emmett's spotlight

Alice: C’mon, Emmett. Ms. Cope’ll be mad that we’re late…again.1

Emmett: *yawns* Let’s ditch today. We’re going to be tardy anyway.2

Jasper: Don’t be a baby and get in the car, Emmett.3

Emmett: Why don’t you? *grumbles* My hand still hurts from that arm wrestling last night.4

Jasper: *sniggers* Sorry, cub.5

Rosalie: Emmett, just get in the car.6

Emmett: *grins* *speaks in an annoying sing-song voice* No problem, sweetie.7

Rosalie: *rolled her eyes*8

Jasper: *eased the tension*9

Rosalie started driving her car. When they were parking…10

Emmett: BEAR HUG! *lunged for Jasper*11

Jasper: *squashed* Get out of me, Em! You're literally breaking my bones!12

Alice: *giggling* Jazz, shut it. You started it last night.13

Jasper: *gasping* Rose! Get your husband away from me!14

Rosalie: *put on her shades and spoke in an expressionless voice* Em, let go of Jazz. Jazz, don’t announce that I’m married or else you won't get out of your room for the next month.15

Emmett: *finally lets go of Jasper* *grinning* How’s that for revenge?16

They got out of the car.17

Jasper: *massaging his shoulders* I thought your hand hurts, cub?18

Emmett: *smug smile* Nah. Edward’s not here to rant about my thoughts.19

Alice: Where’s Edward? *pouts*20

Rosalie: Who cares?21

Jasper: *teasing* Someone’s not in the best mood...22

Emmett sneaking behind Rosalie.23

Rosalie: Shut it Jasper. And don’t say ‘Bear hug’ to me Emmett.24

Emmett: *looks as if he was stung by a bee* When did you get Edward’s power?!25

*Rosalie walks away, wearing her dark tinted shades and ignored Emmett*26

-off screen-27

Director: Yeah, when did Rosalie get Edward’s power?!28

Rosalie: *using her expressionless voice* A few seconds ago.29

Scriptwriter: Since when did you get to be the scriptwriter?!30

Rosalie: *in the same expressionless voice* Half-a minute ago.31

Director: Augh!!! *threw the script in the burning fire*32

Co-director: And where on earth is Robert?!33

Jasper: *snickers* Out with Kristen…34

Director: Damn!35

Emmett: *wide smile* BEAR HUG!

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  • Ashlyn Rose
    May 18

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    HA ha that's funny great job I loved it. It was sooooo Funny! did you know that their shooting new moon in canada? anyway congrats with earning a finalists spot.


    • August Rein
      May 19
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      Thanks In Canada? Wow, that's so cool And thanks for making me a finalist


  • Kari gold member
    April 28

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    Congrats on all of your trophies This put a smile on my face & I loved the ending with bear hugs. So very cute.
    Twilight Rocks.

    Kari

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 4, ending: 4, dialog: 4, characters: 4.


  • KelsiEvermore
    March 30

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    I liked it. Just pointing out somethin, vampires don't need to breath, so saying Jasper can't breath seems kinda off to me.

    • August Rein
      April 1
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      Hmm.. you have point there, vampires can't breathe... haha so idiotic of me for not noticing that... oh well, off to edit thamks!


  • powerpuffs
    March 29

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    I liked it A LOT!!!!

    i love how you put in the charcaters the you put in the director and stuff, Robert Kristen! It was great! good laughs everything!!!!!! thanks for entering my contest dude!!!


    Powerpuffs(Pp)


    • August Rein
      March 29
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      hey, no problem i like your contest btw. I was looking for a contest to enter this story

  • IheartEC
    March 29

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    cute


  • Rose Hathaway
    March 28

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    I loved this. It certainly gave me what I needed, a good laugh on the inside. Thanks for entering!


  • TeamJasperHale
    March 24
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    That was very funny!


  • His.Golden.Eyes
    February 22
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  • Keirii
    February 21

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    This was halarious

    I loved the whole thing, especially Emmetts "Bear Hugs"...lol

    Great little skit you got here.

    LOVED IT!!!


  • Yumiko Kizaka
    February 9
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    very funny, i liked it


  • Deidara-Senpai
    February 9
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    that was funny..!


  • Toxic Valentine
    February 9
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    This was fun to read again. A few errors, but still good=] Good luck in the contest!


  • liduen
    January 11
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    XD That was hillarious!


  • Toxic Valentine
    January 7
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    Awesome!


  • Sgs
    December 30, 2008

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    Hmmmm...interesting. I had trouble following it, but I probably come in on this in the middle! I was looking for something funny though and it's pretty different, lol!


  • Nikki Rowles
    December 30, 2008

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    Emmett: *finally let goes of Jasper* How’s that for revenge?16 shouldn't it be "lets go of"
    Director: Yeah, when did Rosalie got Edward’s power?!27 shouldn't it be "when did Rosalie get..."

    this was a good one...very funny...but I most say that you have some problems with subject verb agreement...but other wise no mistakes were noticed, other than the chat speak which some people wouldn't like...but it's okay it gets the point across
    *Blessed Be*
    Lauren
    P.S. Emmett fan I take it?
    Lauren


    • August Rein
      December 30, 2008

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      No, not an Emmett fan. More of an Alice fan. Thanks for the verdict, truth be told, I used like, about, half an hour thinking over those subject verb agreements. The only reason I used Emmett was because I saw him lunging for Jasper in the car, and I immediately thought, “BEAR HUG!!!”

      • Nikki Rowles
        December 30, 2008
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        oh...lol...I see now the user name gives it away....lol...yes...Alice is the bomb....lol...it's okay...I just have this really proper form of speech...my only real problem is my spelling...lol...but the grammar part is really simple for me...yet I hate English...strange isn't it...lol...anyway...
        *Good luck*
        *Blessed Be*
        Lauren

        • August Rein
          December 30, 2008
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          Well, I don't exactly hate English, but the subject-verb agreement is really driving me crazy. But they say that I'm pretty good in the Spelling part, but still...

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