Not decided perhaps Princess Burden..

Aaron shivered. Lear was later than usual leaving her in the bitter cold. She shuffled her feet to keep them from falling asleep, the noise echoed down the stone street. The elves would hear of this. She sighed not for the first time, recently.She drew back at the sound of uneven footsteps, most likely a drunk local. She watched carefully from the shadows, the being stumbled down the street gasping in deep breaths. "Lear," She cried leaping forward to catch her companion. Blood streamed continously from a wound below his shoulder.1

"They're here for Alia."2

"But we have not reached her!, " She contradicted. Lear attempted to say something ,but his body trembled uncontrolabally. Then he was limp. A tear ran down her cheek as she lay his body down, hopefully someone would give him a proper burial. If given time Aaron would herself ,but there was none to spare. Shifting her weight from one foot to another she ran swiftly down the street. She had taken the time to memorize the Tylian Soldiers Route so she would not have a unpleasant meeting with one. Lear was not the first to die in her presence every time it was harder. 3

The city had no gate so leaving possesed no problem. Rest was harder though she did not need it the weather remained treacherous.4

Camp would need to be made. The terrain surrounding the city was rocky ,but not hilly. Thinking back far she rembered her Ranger training. Slivera or mountain thimble would be easy to find in the near by cracks ,but risked being caught,She thought to herself.5

Capture was not an option it was failure. Without another thought the last ranger bounded forward fingers stretched outwards ,grabbing bits of grass as she ran for anothers life.6

Aaron:Elven Ranger sworn to protect the heir to the throne7

Lear: Elven Ranger To occumpany Aaron8

Alia:The heir to the throne ; wanted by the Tylian Queen9

Aerales:The Tylian Queen ; opposes all but herself10

Breane of three sorceresses to protect Alia; The most headon11

Nia:Second sorceress the most wise of the three always thinks before acting12

Sal:The third and last sorceress she is very young almost as Alia13

Ricatha: Alia's care taker ; takes job very seriously

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  • Sunless Spirit
    December 29, 2008
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    I noticed on eleven:
    LOL

    This is a really good piece.


    • Lorien
      December 29, 2008
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      It was supposed to be = O i believe