New york,20081
A bitter wind whistled around the window as droplets of rain raced down the cold thick glass.I hugged myself as i felt the chill sting through my leather suit.What was i doing here and waiting for him at that.2
"Domeya,I'm glad you came."3
I heard heavy footsteps approaching me.My heart raced as he came closer making me feel as if i couldn't breath."Yes,so what is it you want Domenic"I turned around and there he was beautiful in all his glory peering at me with those pale green eyes that seemed to see right through my unbeating heart.His dark drown hair tickling his cheeks towering over me.4
"how are you,I've heard that you've been messing with the likings again"He placed his hand on my face and i seemed to melt into his hand as it so gently caressed my cheek.5
Oh how i loved him but despised him at the same time.How could he make me melt even in the most coldest times.6
i pulled away afraid i might let my guard down."So what,i didn't come here for you to ask how i am I'm here because there is a job to be done ."7
He turned away his back facing me."Your right,i am sorry"He stood there quiet.i felt the urge to grab him and kiss him so softly, kissing the apologetic words of his big soft pink lips.But i new i couldn't. i couldn't give in not again.8
He faced me.9
"Domeya,we are in great need of your help the vampirian empire is falling every day we find vampires dead.We need your help because you were so close to Lord and king Antony when he fell we fell,you know of his secrets we need you..."he grabbed my hand and kissed it softly."I need you domeya"His eyes pleaded with me.10
I looked out the stone tower window once again.I held in a deep breath."Ok,i will do it...on one condition."11
"Yes anything you want"12
i faced him."After it is all over i never want to see or hear from you again."13
He stepped back as if in pain .He looked down thinking to himself as if it was so hard to choose the empire over me.14
He looked up his green eyes watering."As you wish....Domeya...let us go than.."15
He walked forward as i followed but something stopped me ,something wasn't right but what.i looked up and there i saw a liking up on the balcony sneering down at Domenic.Its rough fur wet from the ran its long disgusting snout filling its lungs with the damp air.That's when are eyes met and i knew it was here to kill Domenic.16
I remember screaming as it jumped on him.I don't remember how it all happening just knowing it did .Domenic lying there bleeding from his chest a metal pole sticking out.17
I looked up at the liking as it began to change back into its human form and my eyes absorbed his tall naked figure.He was beautiful with dark mysterious blue eyes and black hair that waved over his ears .And his body was so well made as if he was sculpted by god himself.So beautiful but pure evil.He looked down at me and paused his eyes confused i stared at him in fear not for my life but for how my breath quickened when i looked at him by how my hands so wanted to touch his tan biceps.18
He looked away and ran.My heart reached out to him.19
I remembered what happen and suddenly hated him once more as Domenic laid there bleeding.I crawled over to him and held him in my arms as i struggled not to cry.20
"don't die Domenic,please don't die."i felt my eyes burn.21
he looked up at me and smirked"so you do have a heart,domeya to bad i didn't find it earlier......i..i love you..."22
His eyes faded behind his dark eyelashes.23
I shook him"no please come back to me Domenic."24
tears burned down my face.I wiped them away and realized they weren't tears but blood.25
And that's when i swore to god that i would get revenge for Domenic that i would raise this empire and that i would kill every liking alive and that i will kill the liking who took his life with my own two hands....26
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This story made me very sad, I liked how you told it though. I can see you took some of the story line off of Underworld.Did you know they're coming out with a second one? heh I just thought you'd like to know. Well, good luck!
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Aww so sad. I like this one nice write very well written and full of imagry and emotion. Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck to you as well.
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I really injoyed this! An amazing vampire story! I cant wait to read more. I love the idea about those beast things 'likings'
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yay .. that was really cool .. it was a good storyline and had alot of good imagery .. you should write a second part for it
.. i'd like to know what happens, coz thats got the basis for a good continuing story .. I really enjoyed reading it .. thankyou so much for entering and i wish you the best of luck in the contest .. keep the ink flowing
~Aimee


