Once upon a time had a magic railroad. But not just any magic railroad. One time I almost lost that magic by a group of teachers who were threatening me and who hate me. It all began when I was nine years old. I found some magic dust and built a railroad. I built six steam engines who can pull freight and three steam engines who pulled passenger trains. Their names were Harold, Joey, Emily, Eddy, James, Coco, Jeff, Amie and Rachel.1
All the kids like my magic railroad. Except for one Principal named Mr. Four and two mean teacher named Mrs. Goldhater and Mr. Koing.2
But before I tell you that story I have to tell you this story. I had a problem at school. I was threatened to be sent to the principal's office. But before I tell you that story I have to tell you this story. 3
One time I accidentally bumped into a kid named Donald. Then Mr. Koing told me to come her and talk. He said I was a very bad student &b he gave me no recess. To make things even worse, we argued with him and he won. The he sent his dead army of Nazis to attack my magic railway. They attacked part of my magic railroad, I wish I could make another engine, but I can't. Mr. Koing is watching my every move! The only way to not see me and spy on my plans is to move into a different class. Now I can tell you the other story about 4
Mrs. Goldhater and Mr. Four threatened me to go to Mr. Four's principal’s office. There I was in the principal's office, a kid named Chandler, she said "I said something bad to him at music and he started doing bad stuff to me." I was telling them that she was guilty. But Mr. four says I was the guilty one so he gave me work. And then he gave me the work & I didn't do the work & it got worse. "If you don't do your work, you're going to spend all day in the principal's office doing work with no lunch or breaks or snacks." said Mr. Four. But I refused to do my work. "If you want to threaten me do it right" I said. "Fine then" said, Mr. Four you'll have to stay in all day and we have to shut down your railroad at the end of the year. Mrs. Goldhater will help."5
I was very shocked indeed. 6
I was in my car with my Mom driving to the barber shop to get my hair cut, I told my Mom that they were threatening me. My Mom agreed that I don't go to School tomorrow. Tomorrow I came to my magic railroad upgraded my engines and fight in the war. Mr. Four, Mr.Koing & Mrs. Goldhater made up a few plans of their own. Mr Four keep me in his office all the time that I can not help the railroad. Mrs. Goldhater loosened the trains wheels so they can not move. And Mr. Koing is watching every move I make. I was worried about all of them, but the one I was worried about the most is Mr. Koing. He's watching my every move and his dead Nazi army will rip my plans and drawings of engines all to shreds.7
But today was a very special day and its like railroad v-day to me. My parents made me stay in a different class for a day. I draw my engine as fast as I can because I only have 4 hours left. And then I say to the Teacher can I be excused, please?" She said,” Sure". I grabbed my hall pass and quickly run to my magic workshop. to build a steam engine, it will take one week. but thanks to my magic dust, it will take nothing but 2 seconds. I sprayed the magic dust on my drawing and puff pop poupang! it was done! I named my engine Hero because it is very fast, very strong has a magic steam saver and has heat vision that can come out from his eyes. 8
The battle is on! I heat visioned 5 groups of Nazis, ran over 2 groups of Nazis and steam savered 15 groups of Nazis. But the war isn't over yet, Mrs. Goldhater and Mr. Four and Mr. Koing, are about to blow up my magic railway with TNT. They were on the tracks so Hero ran over them. They already set the TNT. It was going to blow up the hole railway. Oh people, did I say that Hero has magic dust vision? So Hero used his magic dust vision, strikes the TNT stream and BOOM!!! Magic dust was flying everywhere.9
All the kids ran outside to take a look at my engines. But mostly they applauded Hero. The engine that saved my railway.10
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Comments
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VERY GOOD!
Way to go, buddy!
A story well told!
I liked it.
Thanks for sharing this. You should enter it in some
sort of contest; providing it fits, of course.
I'm sure you'd win something for this. I'm counting on it.
Best wishes to you, my friend!
Many happy days.
Your pal Brian
