Chapter 1

The weather here is cool and breezy.  I love it here.  When you stand here in the front yard you can feel the crispness in the air.  Autumn and winter are my favorite times of the year and here at my cabin it’s like nothing you have ever experienced.  When I arrive at the cabin I like to sit a spell in the front and listen to the birds and feel the wind on my face.  You can hear nature speak to you if you just listen.  The sounds the winds make when blowing thru the trees is like a soft spoken music to my ears.1

After a few minutes of this pristine feeling I start to smell the most sensual aroma.  Espresso slowly roasted to perfection.  The scent draws you in, you feel like you are floating to the door.  The warmth of the cabin radiates thru the wood alerting your senses to the comfort you are about to feel within these mahogany walls.2

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  • owlishhunter
    February 22, 2007
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    Very nicely done You make it sound like such a pretty, pristine place...Great write!


  • goddesskevauna
    June 26, 2005
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    Oooh! Very beautiful! I'm looking forward to more of your little world. Sounds like the complete opposite of mine! But I'm sure it will be great to read!


  • bird-mad girl
    May 14, 2005
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    I'm going to my grandma's cabin out in the woods this summer. I can't wait! It's so beautiful up there. And it's the best going there when Autumn and Winter (my favorite seanson too). But I won't be able to go as much cuz I think I'm moving to Texas!!!! And it's going to suck... oh well.
    Great write mum, I can't wait for the next Chapter. This was such a great read, so peaceful.
    Love ya!

    Always and Forever,
    ~Kendal


  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    May 13, 2005
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    wOW MUM! this is an amazing way to start you new story.... even though its short I enjoyed reading this one! can't wait to read the next chapter!
    luv yah!
    Angel