I've looked at myself and hated,1
Hated the way i look,2
I hate my looks and my body,3
Are ugly and its not nice to look.4
I've hated the way I've been treated,5
When people stop and stare,6
And then you see them laughing,7
As though i wouldn't seem to care.8
I don't think people realise,9
When they what they mean,10
They use and destroy confidence,11
And leave laughing with what they'd achieved.12
But now i realised something,13
That i may not be the best,14
I may not have the looks,15
I may not have the figure,16
But I'm me.17
I noticed that life isn't about what you look like,18
It's what is inside that counts.19
The fact that i can laugh,20
When i used to cry inside.21
I look at myself in the mirror,22
Criticising my features,23
But whats the point if there on me?24
they aren't going to disappear.25
So I'm stuck with the way i look,26
But i can change who i am,27
I can be stronger and much happier,28
And make people see who i really am.29
Now I've been thinking,30
And it dawns on me in my mind,31
I am me and only me,32
Someone to look out from outside,33
But a secret on the inside.34
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really I can't tell you if you are beauty or not. BUt I can say that real beauty is comes from inside not outside , Well dont let anyone lost your self-confident from laughing ! but seems like you do it the best already if you really do it as your poem ! I like the end of this poem, good job and beautiful done, and you express your feellings on this poem really well ! Keep it up ,
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wow sweets, this is very touching and who the hell said you were ugly, you're gorg sweetie, i'd date you if i switched (sori daz, heva!) you are beautiful, dont think otherwise, like you said..even to someone if you're not good looking on the outside, you are on the inside! l8az babe, love ya sky xxx
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lol great poem BUT YOU BEAUTIFUL!!!!
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oooh nice write. Been there a lot, can definately relate. Chin up and keep up the good work XXX
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lol! cheers hun xxxxxxx
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hmm, that is such a gr8 poem huni but is definately NOT true!!!!! YOu are pretty and slim and its unfair! lol. but yeh you are pretty and all that stuf it says your not....hmmm wait i duno, you think this poem true cz if it was random im gna luk a fool with this comment oops
. lol! but yeah amazng poem hunny, you v.gud at this stuf... lol! xxxxxxxxxxx
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