Screw Life, for All it's Worth

For days on days1

I was hung on you2

For days and days3

I would watch everything you do4

But now I know5

That I was wrong6

You're no gift7

You're a loss8

Time that I've wasted9

Time that can't be replaced and10

Now I know I was wrong11

To have ever gone so far12

So screw life for all that it's worth13

Screw life for all the dollars we've earned14

Screw life for all the times15

You said you loved me16

Screw life for all you lines17

The thoughts the hopes and all of your lies18

I made a mistake 19

Once, not again20

You say I am selfish21

Now I'll be sure to remain22

Just to spite you23

Just to hurt you24

Just so I know that I can can control you25

When you screw with my head26

Now that I'm gone27

Do you feel your mistake?28

Now that I'm gone 29

Do you hate your own hate?30

Now that I'm gone31

Do you wish that I weren't?32

Now that I'm gone33

Do you wish I were yours?34

Now that I'm gone 35

I know I'll never feel 36

The way that I did37

When you asked to be friends38

When you played with my head39

When you wished I were dead40

Safely I say41

Without your hate or my fear42

You screwed my life for all it was worth

Author notes

Horrible poem, but I wrote it when my girlfriend (see "Untitled") broke up with me. It was a pretty crappy few days and I wasn't really concerned about rhyming (which I can't do anyway...) or making it sound good. So... try not to hate it tooooo much.

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  • WriteGuy
    January 16
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    elizabeth again -.- get over it


  • penridge11
    December 29, 2008

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    hey great poem andrew. but dude uve got to get over it. lol. ur such a liar. "im over it" hahah anyway still loved the whole thing. really flowed.