C.O.L.O.U.R

C-who you are
O-f course, a beautiful person
L- is not the place because of your image
O-nly you can prove your beauty
U-are beautiful inside and out
R-emember, beauty is skin deep1

Have a little colour in your life~

Author notes

What the fack is this crap?! XO I had writer's block, and was looking through old unfinished thingies on my comp, and I found this. Oh well, it's catchy, and it's the first poem of mine I can remember word for word xD

Originally it was "O-my, a beautiful person" but I didn't really dig the sound of the oh my xD

It was actually a little opening poem I had for a story I wanted to write, but sadly, twas never written, and it's probably the most original thing I've ever thought of yet I can't write it xD Anybody want the idea? Message me (if you have no life >.>)


Enjoy~

~*princess*~

P.S: For you American folk you can skip out the U xD

...I don't get it either. o.o

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  • MrsSpunkRansom
    January 7

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    ahaha. never heard "fack" before. touche, nice word.
    wait a sec! did i just use a smarty-pants word in the wrong way?
    *whips out handy webster's dictionary, pushes glasses on, and snorts*
    oh! hehe, guess not.
    and now i realize that i didn't comment on the actual poem.
    nice work, although it didn't make sense.


  • Someday Hero. gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    wtf xD

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