She Knew

I peered through the silent trees watching her walking in the distance,1

so beautiful, so innocent and so pure. The stars seemed to cry down to her, warning her of what was to come. A tear fell from my eye as i listened to her young voice singing of love, flowing through the night air.2

I saw how the bullet took her, I heared her silent scream. She fell from the cliff like a gracefull swan and cut through the lake like a knife.3

Droplets of water burst into the air like a thousand shooting stars...4

So dead.5

I had to do it before she told, so what if she was only fourteen, who cares if she was my own loving daughter? She knew, and nothing could change that...6

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  • PureAmethyst
    May 13, 2005
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    yes thankyou, i will write more in time xXxPurexXx

  • Gemini1983
    May 12, 2005
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    This is very strange. I would have liked to know more. This seems more like an entry or the back of a cover to a novel. I hope that you writ more to this. I think it would be a nice read.