Restive nights with wakeful turning
Flesh left cindered with reckless yearning
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Absent touch, sound and breath
Without you here, there’s only death.
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Our laughing days and passionate nights;
I even miss our unreasonable fights.
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I miss you much, with all my soul
I realize now, that you make me whole.
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To heed your voice, so light and sure
I would feel so treasured; I would sense so pure.
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Hear my calling; listen to my voice
It’s only you, who can make this choice.
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I crave your heart; I want your touch,
Please reflect on it, I love you so much.
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For Durian ♥
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Awe,
it made me smile [:
It was so full of beautiful emotion and passionate words.
I simply adored this poem.
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This was such a sweet poem and your rhyming flowed very well together.
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Thank you very much!
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this poem is so touching. it's not only the words but the meanings behind them. :')
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Thank you !:L)
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Hear my calling; listen to my voice
It’s only you, who can make this choice.
These are touching lines, the poem in whole is beautiful yet saddening. The longing and need to be with that person. The one person that completes them and the deep burning turmoil of absence.
well written kit
Blair
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This is very touching Kit... I hope things work themselves out for the both of you.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Thank you . They did and we are back together He's my little Stryke again
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Would you two just get back together already, ....jeeesssshhhh...
while walking away.
You miss him,
he misses you,
1 + 1 = 'get the hell back together before i have to do something rash!'.
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shut up butthead.
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aww
very touching poem i loved it.....
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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This is a very touching and heart felt poem packed with your emotions and sentiment. I feel your loneliness. You made my heart ache. You are an amazing writer Kit.
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Thank you very much!
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You know i miss you too, Cat.
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You don't have to anymore!
I love you, my Rian.
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