A long thread of saliva stretched from the side of his jaw. He knew that he should try to fight these feelings of excitement and overwhelming power, but it was so much more thrilling to let them take over. After all, he pondered as his victims unknowingly rode towards their fate, Isn’t that what separates us from the animals? And that was indeed an interesting question to ask in his present state.......1
Taken from chapter one of Conner- http://storywrite.com/story/105467
A contest entry
- Quote Yourself! by GodBlessCatastrophe.
375 points, ended December 28, 2008, 37 entries
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Ooh, irony! Excellent! That's an awesome quote. Also, you said "saliva". Hee hee! For no good reason at all, that cracks me up!
I like the fact that he is acknowledging and fighting his instincts, while still mentally pondering their meanings. -
hmmm makes me wonder definately what happens. I might read this story. Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you! And thank you for reading it!
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Great work, nice and primal. It's a really illustrative description that feels different even though it describes something that hundreds and hundreds of stories have dealt with before.
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Thank you very much! And thank you for hosting such an interesting contest!
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Awesome
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Thank you
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