Thoughts are the pattern of life
Your voice is much stronger
The way you express yourself
It inspires me deep within my loins
The words of a true artist
No one can imitate
The beauty that flows
When you put words to a page
One day I can only hope
That I could master something
So beautiful, with depth
To be a true writer
Never hidden with the burden of reasons
Author notes
This it a poem for Jason.
Today I saw a side of him I have never seen.
Or rather he showed me a side of him that inspired me to write.
He is a true writer.
It astounded me, the purity and rawness of his words
It just flowed and had to be written.
I hope he enjoys it
As will you.
Blair 
Honest please =] what do you think of my poem
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Simply and completely beautiful Blair. It is a blessing to see the beauty in someone's words, especially when that someone shows a deeper side of them self then you had ever seen before. I know this very well for I have experienced the same.
I knew a man who was rough and tough and everything he ever spoke of was rough then I read some of the things he had written and was amazed. The passion he had for these things and the way he wrote of them was so new to me. As luck would have it, I got to know this man better and better and am still touched by so many of his writings.
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This is amazing
dunno rly know who Jason is, but you dedicated an amazing poem to him... its positively amazing... it flowed so freely, like ocean waves, just sorta moved against the tide moving the readers in with it, like they were grains of sand. This was deep, meaningful, simply put, it was beautiful. ^^
-Adelaide Blood
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Jason is my partner
he is talented and has been longing to be a writer long before I was even thought of
thank your for your comment
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