Quote from "The Chosen- Chapter 2: Arrival"

I reached up and touched his "love" mark on his forehead, making him look down at me again, a bit shocked.1

"I just want to make your hurt, that loneliness go away. You need to be...." Frantic, gurgling coughs erupted from me, blood spewing all over. 2

"Gaara...' I whispered, slipping into blissful unconsciousness.

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This quote is from my story "The Chosen- Chapter 2: Arrival"

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  • Valkyrie silver member
    January 19

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    Ooh, dramatic! That's intense! The "Gaara" rather sounds like the character is gurgling in death, rather than saying a name...that's cool and creepy at the same time!


  • GodBlessCatastrophe
    December 21, 2008
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    Beautiful. Seems like you spent a lot of effort on finding the right words, and look! It paid off.