My quotes

"I'll tell you a secret." She kneeled down low beside him. "Earlier, when I said 'Knowledge is power.' I was wrong. There's only one true power. It's why these people cling to Bob and I. It's why you cling to your money. Love is power."1

I loved you to the very core of your soul and I could feel that love returned in your blood as it flowed through me. I wanted more. I needed more, but Keir stopped me just before I killed you.2

Author notes

for contest; Quote Yourself!
by GodBlessCatastrophe


The first one is from "Why Bot - Why Not" I'm not to this part in the edited version of my story yet (it's at the end) but the first few chapters are here; http://storywrite.com/list/36778-Why-Bot---Why-Not--unfinished-novel-

The second is from Bram in ch4 of "Leaving the Light.
http://storywrite.com/story/230272

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  • Valkyrie silver member
    January 19

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    I really enjoyed the first quote! The truth that rings in it is deep and awesome.
    The second quote is creepy! Brings new meaning to "I love you to death." Very powerfully done, and both SO hooked me!


  • lavanya
    December 21, 2008
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    very intresting lines Toni...and i know stories are equally intresting...i m sure who ever going to read them will be devoted reader but u know i don't want competition in this field i m your biggest fan and will be..........hahahaah....good luck for contest dear.


    • tonialoise
      December 21, 2008
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      always will be my biggest fan, you know it.

      thanks dear.


  • GodBlessCatastrophe
    December 21, 2008

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    I agree with previous commentator, they're really hooky. Seems like love stories that are about more than just love.

    • tonialoise
      December 21, 2008
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      well, the first is actually sci-fi which has only a small subplot involving romance.

      The second is much more but at its heart a romance.

      thanks for commenting. Glad you liked it.


  • SaccharineMini
    December 21, 2008

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    They would hook me! I really liked the second one a lot. They're very good. Much luck in contest Toni!!!
    Nicky-
    p.s. I am soo winning the gold membership hehe

    • tonialoise
      December 21, 2008
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      Thanks, well go read the stories and comment on them, I guarantee you'll get some memberships if you comment on every chapter, already one person's done it.

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