He counted the mile markers along the interstate to relieve the boredom of the long drive. It somehow seemed funny that he could be bored, knowing that in a few hours he’d be dead.
Author notes
From my story "Suicide Chronicle."
A contest entry
- Quote Yourself! by GodBlessCatastrophe.
375 points, ended December 28, 2008, 37 entries
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Comments
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Whoa, what a hook! How did this not win something? That's quite a stealthy end of your sentence, how it just sneaks up on me and POW!! *is totally curious now about original story!*
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This really paints a picture, makes you feel something, great work. Please tell from which story you took it.
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