From The Deranged

{"I hope I never have to encounter him again." Potter thought out loud.241

"You might get your wish." A dark voice rang over the rafters. Potter sat up and looked behind her finding a a tall dark figure looming above her.}2

{Potter unlocked the door and began to opened here mouth to scream. Moss came up behin her and gaped in horror. No! Oh, please God, NO!}

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  • Valkyrie silver member
    January 19

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    Definitely spooky. Harry Potter fanfic? Or just chance?
    Oops, I thought this was one single quote until I read the comments...I guess that's what the {} are for. Makes more sense now!


  • J-Dus
    January 3
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    Good quotes Kind of creepy though, lol


  • GodBlessCatastrophe
    December 21, 2008

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    They're both really creepy - in a good way. Looks like you were in a bit of a hurry when you wrote the second one though. Shouldn't it be: "Potter unlocked the door and began to OPEN HER mouth to scream"?