"His smile reached one side of his face to the other, his eyes dancing to a silent song of joy. For that moment…for that ONE golden moment…Luke was absolutely breathtakingly beautiful. I didn’t even know guys could be called beautiful, but that was the perfect word for Luke at that moment. And for that moment, I understood why Noah cared so much about Luke’s happiness. His sincere, heartfelt smile is one of the greatest gifts someone could ever receive."1
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"He never keeps his feet on the ground when we're watching them, because he thinks something’s gonna come outta nowhere and like, pull him into the unknown, or something like that. And he gets all paranoid, thinking there's something behind him that's gonna eat his face off. He gets nightmares, and then he can't even go to the bathroom by himself! He makes me wait outside the door 'till he finishes!"3
Author notes
They're both from the same story 
- "View from an Outsider"
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Comments
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Your quotes paint a vivid picture for sure, and definitely give an insight into your characters. Great job! I enjoyed reading the full story as well.
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Very good quotes You can tell they are from the same story reading them .
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I enjoyed the last one a lot, it's very well spoken. I strongly recommend you tell me, and everyone else that is interested, from which story you took the quotes.
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They're both from my story "View from an Outsider," in case you want to check it out sometime *wink wink*
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