"As if ‘sorry’ could heal the chasm that formed between the halves of my heart. For weeks I cried, for months I suffered. And now, so long afterward, I still love you."
Author notes
Taken from "Dear Someone" by Radiance.
A contest entry
- Quote Yourself! by GodBlessCatastrophe.
375 points, ended December 28, 2008, 37 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ooh, you said chasm!
I love the image that creates, the scope of the damage it implies. What a great line, and an awesome quote.
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woah O.O
that's deep.
good luck in the contest
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ahhh...if only I were judging...
Very good. Very simple. Very true.
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Mmm, "the chasm that formed between the halves of my heart." Such good use of the language just makes me all warm inside. Thanks for the entry.
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