*Quotes himself*

"People hate violence and will go on protest marches - 'end war' or 'don't hurt the animals’ - but when you ogle their girlfriend, socking you one is on the top of things to do… so illogical."

Author notes

This is a quote from probably one of the deepest stories I've written: What They Say: http://storywrite.com/story/213922

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  • Valkyrie silver member
    January 11

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    Ha! That's hilarious. And even more so because it's true. What an excellent choice for this contest. Irony is one of my favorite literary devices, and you've used it with delicate precision here.


  • J-Dus
    December 23, 2008
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    haha....Nice quote...very true...Guys get too protective lol.


  • Lonesome Dove
    December 22, 2008

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    Yes I totally agree with you!!! People will say save the whales or don't let animals be in the circus, but when it comes to children selling themselves on the street or the poor and hungry in our own neighbourhoods they turn a blind eye. You quote goes beyond beyond the reaches of just physical violence and war. Fantastic quote. Good Luck in the contest.


    • DoozerDan silver member
      December 22, 2008

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      Glad to know some people do. The original story goes into some more depth on the subject, it's a short story but I've packed a lot into the author notes (which is longer than the story).

      Thanks for the read, comment and applause.


      • Lonesome Dove
        December 22, 2008
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        I'll have to take a look at it then. I like your sense of humor.


  • Midnightmare
    December 21, 2008
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    Hahaha so true.
    Good job (Y)


  • tonialoise
    December 21, 2008

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    things that make you go hmmmmmm....

    Yes, it's illogical, irrational, and very human. Sad too.


  • DuchessAura of Brie silver member
    December 21, 2008

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    "is on the top of things to do"? Kinda confusing xD Try "Is on the top of the list of things to do."
    I remember this story


  • RxxSpiritWolfxxJ
    December 21, 2008
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    Deep, huh.
    That's you, Danny.


  • GodBlessCatastrophe
    December 21, 2008
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    Exactly! Don't they see it's a free market? Whatever happened to friendly competition?

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