To Save the Forsaken (Quote for a Contest)

“Why won’t you give up? It’s over. All is lost. Are you so willing to sacrifice everything for her? What about your duty? What about your promise? What about our world!”1

“She is my world! A day, an hour, a minute, even if I can only be with her a second longer, your world means nothing. I will not let you take her!”2

Angels Fall First3

~Michael to Lucian~4

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Quote from Angel's Fall First:
http://storywrite.com/story/88021

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  • Valkyrie silver member
    January 11

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    Ohh, a lurve quote! That's one of the best I've seen. I love the questions in the first part...so dramatic!


  • Lonesome Dove
    December 22, 2008

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    And that... is true love. Beautiful quote. It can definately stand out on it's own. Good luck in the contest.


  • Faeinthewood
    December 21, 2008

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    Ok! So I have offically decided I must read this whole story!!!!! This is amazing! I wanted to cry it is so wonderful! The poor guy! I just have to find out what happens! You got my attention and that is pretty darn good!


  • GodBlessCatastrophe
    December 21, 2008
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    Whoa! That's a "moment of truth" if I eve saw one. Good work.