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December 2, 7:34 p.m.1

sexyblonde12: logs on
hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs on2

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: hey sexy babe.3

sexyblonde12: hi. who's this?4

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: i love you.5

sexyblonde12: WHO IS THIS?6

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: do you love me?7

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: baby, i love you. 8

sexyblonde12: logs off
hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs off9


December 3, 6:04 p.m.10

sexyblonde12: logs on
hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs on11

sexyblonde12: how do you know when i get on i.m.?12

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: cause i love you.13

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: you looked real pretty at school today. ;]14

sexyblonde12: WHO THE HELL ARE YOU?!?!15

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs off
sexyblonde12: logs off16


December 3, 8:47 p.m.17

sexyblonde12: logs on
hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs on18

sexyblonde12: .....19

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: i love you. tonight im gonna show you that i love you for reals.20

sexyblonde12: get the eff away from me! leave me alone!21

sexyblonde12: logs off
hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs off22


December 3, 2:48 a.m.23

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs on24

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: baby, im here. i love you.25

hOtNsPiCyGUY48: logs off26

She reads the message and climbs back in her bed, terrified to death. She hears knocking outside her window. She slowly and quietly makes her way to the kitchen and sits in a corner with a knife in her hand.27

There's a loud knock on the door leading to the garage, right next to the kitchen.
Another knock.
Another knock.28

The knocks stop.29

She sneaks back to her room and climbs in her bed. Just as she's about to fall asleep, she hears breathing right next to her, in her bed. She jerks quickly and leaps out of bed. Crying hard. Before she could go anywhere, cold hands grab her waist and she feels a sharp pain down her spine. The killer slit her back in half. She fell to the floor. She bled to death.30

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  • Serene Grace
    December 21, 2008
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  • VainfulSideEffects
    December 21, 2008

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    I dont' mean to accuse you, but this is excatly similar to a chain mail I've seen 4 times. But this is good but the ending goes way to fast, but yeah it's good. And good luck