Filled with an Everlasting Love, Spotting her in the Amber Field of Grain, His heart began to Jump.1
That any Good?
Author notes
It's no good, Written fast, Explains itself.
A contest entry
- Beautiful by Taylor Renee.
225 points, ended December 30, 2008, 19 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like it
very short...
and you should put enter at every comma.
just givin my advice..
i like the words...
looks like they have real feeling
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It's very good.
This really makes me smile. =)
Especially the last part. It gives me that nice fuzzy feeling in my tummy.
Really, you did nicely. Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck.
xoxo
-♥-
Tay
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