I felt a rush of passion run down my spine as his deep sorrowful eyes looked up to me. He stared in beauty. His lips the shape of love his hair brings a smile to my tear stained face. i look behind me and i see his eyes in lock with hers.1
All i want is too feel his arms wrap around me and hold me close to his chest. i want to hear his heart beat echo in my ears and him to whisper, "i love you."2
I need him to tell me he feels the same i do. that at night he's kept awake with the thoughts of us being together. the thoughts that he feels something inside of him, that only i could make him feel.3
Just to stare at you makes my whole body tremble. I look to you with all my heart and when i speak i feel as though words cannot describe it. Emotions can not do it justice. Words cannot speak my full intentions. Only you telling me you feel the same could hold it in place. 4
I imagine kisses lingering on my cheeks and when we embraced the passion would make my heart race. Just to stand looking at him tears my heart in two. 5
He is so near and yet so far, and all because he's in love with you.6
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This is really touching poem , well I thought thats poem/story , I can really relate to , and a lot of emotions. Great done. I like that your said " He is so near and yet so far " that is really true ! Keep on writing , you did a wonderful and beautiful job. Be proud you're a good poet !
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Ola hunny, this is a fabola poem.....didnt even no u wre on storywrite but anyways....great poem!! tis very cute and sad!! Luvvies and huggles
xx
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I really love the emotion of this. Very sweet. You put the reader in the character's place. Great job.
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Thanks
What comes from the heart speaks from the mind
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To intense for a simple wrier like me to expr
omg, this poem has touched my heart, im actually crying...(somewhat embarasing because im in class...) **tears run down my face as i search for words to describe the intense feeeling, the awesome flow and the beautiful heart renching truth, i put the usaual "nice job, good write" and wipe the tears from my face, hoping my classmates miss the movement*
Bravo another one of these and ill be bawling my eyes out (trust me, thtas sayign something, i never cry but this poem is just to powerful to ignore)
,^^ Wolf
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