Love

Don't pretend broken hearts will mend,1

They last in you forever,2

You can move on,3

You can be strong,4

But a part of you leaves forever.5

Love is a word of pain,6

Yet the feeling we all desire.7

Too fall in love can change your world,8

But to fall out kills you by the hour.9

But i want to take this chance to change it,10

Change its meaning and its pain.11

I want it to become a feeling,12

That people won't ever regret again.13

I want my friends to know i love them,14

As they are all different in their own ways.15

And if someone ever hurt them,16

Forgive, because people don't always stay the same.17

You need to look within someone,18

Too find their true potential.19

Too look and prejudge them,20

Shows that you are disrespectful.21

I want you all to remember that grudges bear a scar,22

They imprint you life with jealously,23

And gradually,24

This will tear you apart.25

Do not make the same mistakes i do,26

Don't dwell in the past,27

I cannot destroy my hatred,28

But you are given the chance and can.29

Now listen to what Ive said,30

And learn from my words,31

Love and don't hate,32

Because if not,33

You will loose those who mean most to you.34

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  • Ianthe
    May 14, 2005
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    Hey this is amazing the first stanza is amazing and the rest of the poem doesn't disappiont lots of love RD

  • Heather.x
    May 10, 2005
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    YAY! first too comment!! that is amazing baby!!!! well written, you rly gud at writin arnt ya?!?! lol xxxx
    Edited on May 10, 1:32 p.m. because ''.