At first i thought i'd hate you1
when i saw you with her2
that's why i never spoke3
unless she made me4
but then i saw her smile5
oh the light in her eyes6
i guess now i'm thankful7
that you call her "Baby"8
I was stuck undecisive9
between you and my dad10
but that time has passed11
and it can never be turned back, sadly12
So i'm real protective of her13
because she's all i got14
i'm just apologizing and 15
hope you understand me16
Besides my sis there's17
no one in this world 18
who loves me like mom do19
can you understand why i've been a little shady?20
But love is weird21
and so are you two22
so all i can say23
is welcome to the family
Author notes
So i wrote this for my soon to be step dad. I was pretty rotten to him. I mean except for the dark skin, he's the complete opposite of my dad. And even though my dad has two new kids I still had the hope that he and my ma would get back together. But i've matured since then. It's not that good of a poem but what the hell, i needed something to go along with his characiture.
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Pretty good poem, You can tell it was written from the heart, and the emotion comes through very strong
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It is not a bad poem it is a good poem because you wrote for someone and it shows your emotions. I really liked it and I'm sure your soon to be step dad will understand. Great job!
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I think its a great poem because its from the heart. I do hope you printed up a copy of this and gave it to him.
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Ahhh...very nice picture and very nice poem as well. Nothing wrong at all with the structure or flow of this work...it does very well. I do hope your family tis happy.
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