dark angel:the awaking

Rebecca awoke to a white room,thinking she was in a psychiatric ward she panicked,ripping the I.V out of her arm.She looked to her left and saw a cop sleeping in the chair,Even though he looked so cute sleeping he was a cop non the less and could not be trusted.1

REBECCA:i must be in a hospital.2

rebecca whispered as she jumped out of bed and on to the cold floor grabbing her clothes.3

She looked around spotting a window and slowly walked toward it,not wanting to wake up the officer.She stopped,and looked at his gun.4

REBECCA:hummmmmmm a gun.5

she smirked quietly walking over to him and reached,slowly,slowly.she had her hand on it when he started to stir his eyes open.She froze they were startling blue.6

she let go of the gun and stepped back.7

he rubbed his eyes8

JAKE:nice to see your awake and ok.9

REBECCA:who are you?????10

he smiled and got up.11

He was so tall about 6'12

JAKE:Jake Thompson,Just started on the job and you are....13

REBECCA:Rebecca's Jones....am i under arrest14

Jake shook his head.15

REBECCA:than why are you here.16

JAKE:the man that you choked told us a story about you...He told me that 11 years ago Jorge main killed your mother...I'm sorry but is that true..17

rebecca started to tremble just as she did that day.The image of Jorge's face flashed through her mind.18

REBECCA:whats it to you.19

Jake looked around20

JAKE:he killed my father 11 years ago as well.My dad worked for his boss.DR.Lucas imperi it seems that hes a genetic scientist who uses animals to combined DNA to get good traits and make a super animal.Well rumors have it that he also used children.......you can also heal yourself.21

he walked over and grabbed the bandage off her arm.22

their was no cut anywhere just a new scar.23

Rebeca snatched her hand away and looked at him wide eye.24

REBECCA:leave me alone do you hear..stay away from me.25

he walked up the her.26

JAKE: don't you see rebecca we were used as pawns they want us but we want revenge and i know how to get it we have to kill Dr.Lucas before he hurts more people.27

REBECCA:no if he does get ahold of us what will he do.28

JAKE:use us to take over the world.We have super human strength,healing powers were indestructible,But rebecca theirs something about you that he wants past the super human strength your the special one.29

rebecca sat on the bed she put her hands on her head.30

REBECCA:i dont understand this i dont....31

Jake walked over to her32

JAKE:are you in i have to know now...33

Rebecca saw her mothers face flashed before her eyes before they shot her such fear.34

rebecca looked up at him.35

REBECCA:lets go.36

he smirked.37

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  • Jinxgirl
    May 22, 2005
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    interesting... this has a lot of potential. however this was really kind of hard to follow the way you typed it. It's a cross between a script and a story adn that makes it kind of confusing.