dark angel:the beggining

In a apartment building in newyork a mother and a daughter was getting ready for dinner.1

the little girl with black hair and Green eyes was setting the table in her little white night gown, why her mother brought the food to the table.It was bread,and some ham and cheese.After she puts it on the table she goes to the kitchen to get the orange juice.Just than the lights dime than go off.The child stands still2

MOTHER:becca stay where you are Mommy's coming with light.3

she rummages through the drawer by the light off the moon from the window.4

She finaly found a candle and lite it she found a few more and goes to the table.She put them around the living room table.5

BECCA:mama they turned off the lights again.6

she patted her head.7

MOTHER:i know baby,i know...come on lets eat.8

they put a couple of sandwhiches together and ate.Like always it was quiet 9

BECCA:mama wheres daddy.10

her mother put down the sandwhich.11

MOTHER:well baby...i..i dont know..12

BECCA:is he alive13

To be truthful she didnt know but she couldn't tell becca that.14

MOTHER f course baby yeah hes here for you.15

she picked up the sandwhich and started eating it again.16

Just than their was a pound on the door.17

MAN:julie open up where the hell is tommy.18

julie got up and grabbed becca she signaled her to be quiet.19

MAN:i know your in their i can hear you breathing open the hell up,or my boys are ganna have to force it..tommy owes us something very important20

SILENCE21

MAN: ok thats it were coming in.And your ganna pay for it you and rebecca.22

She panicked and looked around she saw the ventilation shaft on top of the ceiling.she climbed up on a chair and took it off.She picked up her daughter and put her in the their.23

JULIE:shhh.baby stay their until i get you ok dont come out until their gone.24

becca nodded.25

she closed it and got down.26

she grabbed a bat and hide behind the door just as the guys opened it and broke it down.She swang at the first face she saw smacking his head wide open.27

MAN:get her .28

she swang again hitting the guy in the shoulder,but no use two men took her down.29

two other guys looked around.30

MAN2:hey jorge tommy  or the kids not here what do we do with the lady31

JORGE:kill her.32

julie struggled screaming.33

JULIE:noooooo nooo please.34

becca watched as the man took out a gun pointed it to her head and shot....becca stared her breathe cought.jorge looked around rebecca absorbed in his face just as he left.35

JORGE: ok lets go.36

they walked out.37

rebecca opened the ventilation shaft and jumped down she fell and hit her face on the table she felt no pain as she walked up to her mother and looked as the dark liquid spilled from her mothers once beautiful face..Her hands started to tremble.Tears streaming down her face.Sirens sounded in the background.38

BECCA:noooooooourghhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!39

***********11 years later40

A beautiful young women walks down the street.She has long black hair and green eyes.She's wearing a black overcoat with black higheels in a black leather suit.41

She walks into a alley where two white middle age  men are making a drug deal.42

They look at her and smirk.43

Man1:Hey baby,how yah doin' after i settle this wanna go down to my place and have a couple of beers.44

Man2:joe dont mess with her that's rebecca jones.Her mother was slottered in front of her eyes.rebecca stopped walking and turned around.She walks toward them.45

She punches the first man and he falls then she slams the other guy against the wall choking him.46

Rebecca:you dont know me fool you dont know me or my mother so shut your goddam mouth you understand i dont wanna hear my name in your mouth again.understand.47

he shook his head.48

Rebecca:good..49

she through him.And continued to walk.She went into a war house and sat down on a dirty couch.She looked into a dirty broken mirror and looked at her face,she winced as she seen the thin scar down her cheek.50

Rebecca:so ugly...51

she got up and kicked the mirror .She grabbed a long rigged piece and pulled up her sleeves and cut up her arm.Manny scars littered her arm.She sliced deep with ease,blood dripped down her arm as she laughed through tears.52

the sound of  police cars echoed in the the war house.She not caring.53

Just than two police officers came in busting down the door.They shined their flashlights into the dark warhouse.54

one officer was jake Thompson,he had black hair that waved over his ears and blue eyes that were cold and stern.He looked at his partner officer joe demago.55

JOE:lets split remember a women in black possibley armed.go.56

jake nodded and walked the opposite way.57

Jake walked and heared a noise he turned his flashlight toward the sound.58

Jake:hey,anyone there come out.59

he looked on the floor and saw a girl laying on the floor.60

he walked toward her than noticed blood on the floor.61

Jake:hey are you ok.62

her ran over to her.63

he picked her up and saw a beautiful women with a scar across her face.he grabbed her wrist and put pressure on it.64

JAKE:joe call the ambulance hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.65

he looked down at the beauty.66

jake:you'll be ok .......67

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