Part 4, here it goes....1
I was feeling quite alone, in my room, sitting doing nothing. We had been on so many adventures, we all had nothing to do. I sat on my bed of blue duvet and purple and black pillows, whilst staring into the nothingness that was was room. 2
Suddenly..... CRASH! There was an almighty bang. My window had broken and all the glass went shattering onto the floor. It was a magical carpet. I'm not sure how a carpet managed to brake a window, but that's not the point. On the carpet sat Zoe and Lloyd, holding hands of course.3
"What the f***?" I questioned. "It's our magical new carpet!" they both said. "Wanna come for a spin?" asked Zoe. "Sure!" I replied with glee. I jumped on, and we flew out of my broken window. We flew over the forest and into Winchester, where we picked up Feee. She was very exited to be flying on a magic carpet and got very very hyper from it. Next we went to pick up Dan, he was sitting in his room feeling very unhappy. I grabbed his leg and pulled him up onto the carpet. "Ah ha ha ha!" I laughed. Dan started to feel happier, now that he had his friends to comfort him. We flew to Stanmore next, to get Rhys. Rhys was in his caravan /gnome-home dancing. Feee took him by the arm and the carpet swooped into the air. "Yay" said Rhys. We flew around for a bit and then realised we had forgotten Kat and Dorsa. I forgot where Kat lived and had to asked Zoe. Zoe told me she lived in Chardlers Ford, which was actually quite handy, since that's where Dorsa lives. Feee told everyone to skip Dorsa's house because she was very silly. We all agreed and flew passed her house laughing. We picked up Kat and flew off into the sky. It was very spiffing and we ate a lot of cake. 4
We flew to The Magic Roundabout where we met Dougal. Zoe was very exited to be meeting her look-a-like (in a non-doggish way) ((cos we all love Zoe muchly)) and she danced around with happiness. They walk arounf the garden and twirld their walking sticks (rasberry flavour of course) They walked on and Zebedi arrived. "Shall we go?" he asked. "We shall" I replied. Feee decided to go and Florence because no one liked her and her hair was silly. Me and Kat found Dylan and said hello to him. Rhys found Ermintrude and rode her like a horse, literally. Lloyd and Dan went off to find Brian because he was like... the only one left. The found him, he was digging hole. "Hello" said Dan. Brian carried on digging this hole until Dan got very aggitated and kicked him down the hole. Dan then went into a strop and sat down. Everyone decided to ake Dan home and they climbed back onto the carpet. I had to drag Feee back on the carpe with a bit of a struggle, she was having way too much fun chasing Florence, kicking her and hitting her. Florence ran off screaming and Feee gave a very evil laugh.5
nce because no one liked her and her hair was silly. Me and Kat found Dylan and said hello to him. Rhys found Ermintrude and rode her like a horse, literally. Lloyd and Dan went off to find Brian because he was like... the only one left. The found him, he was digging hole. "Hello" said Dan. Brian carried on digging this hole until Dan got very aggitated and kicked him down the hole. Dan then went into a strop and sat down. Everyone decided to ake Dan home and they climbed back onto the carpet. I had to drag Feee back on the carpe with a bit of a struggle, she was having way too much fun chasing Florence, kicking her and hitting her. Florence ran off screaming and Feee gave a very evil laugh. 6
They all flew back into the real world and dropped everyone off home. I jumped through my window and arrived back in time for tea.7
Then I woke up.8
.THE END.9
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dearheart this truly kix ass! i luv it very muchly! -xXx-zoe-xXx-
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all i need in life is pen and paper
this is a awsome story. Great detale, and an amaginative and creative ways you use to write. A great writeing style you have going on. I really congradulate you on this. Its really cool. Thanks for writeing a great write!!!


